RE: Action Comics #5
You’re better than this.
No one talks like that. No one, on any planet, talks like that. No one.
You decided to re-tell Superman’s origin again – WTF, Grant? And the Kents? NO ONE TALKS LIKE THAT, EITHER. Aside from the fact that Superman’s origin is the oldest, best known story in Comics, you managed to make it more tepid and ZZZZzzzzz than any other version I’ve read.
Grant, you’re better than this.
NO ONE TALKS LIKE THAT!